May be, I din't realise,
When love was around,
with you by my side,
all the while.
May be I din't pay heed,
when feelings transcended words,
smiles conveyed treasured hopes,
and gestures painted the canvas
of life with love.
May be I never saw through your eyes,
that sparkled with true admiration for me,
and were always on a lookout
for my anticipated presence.
May be I missed that love,
that could have been mine,
all mine.
May be I fret over it in the coming years,
shedding silent tears,
and heaving painful sighs.
May be I missed that love,
that could have been mine,
all mine!
7 comments:
lol, lol, lol. Emotional is good. Obsessive emotional is bad.
the proverb... when you dont have eyes only will u know the value of them... into a poem..
good!!
This time you missed.Make sure next time you don't do that.Pain behind this is evident.But life's to go on.Cheer up
Nice post
Salil
http://views-point.blogspot.com/
very well
Pain is like this.
i wish n pray cheering life ahead for uu
May be I fret over it in the coming years,
shedding silent tears, <-- This part is the clincher ! I see you have got some real good poetic insights out here.
Thanks so much for sharing such a wonderful piece of work. Looking forward to see more from you. Thanks
god!! how did i miss this one ... glad i felt to take a looka t ur blog :) liked the word play here.. but one thing .. you will not regret anything :) God bless !!
Ah, the regret in this one. Well done!!! You've expressed or rather revealed those inner questions all ask themselves in circumstances such as these. Keep writing!!!
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