Aaj Bhi...

My first hindi poetry.

.Aaj yun hi kalam uthakar kuch likhne ka mann hua,

I am putting it up with an anxious mind..Your suggestions and criticism welcomed.Here it goes,

"Yaadon ke samundar mein jhaank kar to dekho,

aaj bhi meri yaadon mein doob jaoge

dil ki gehraaiyon mein utar kar to dekho,

aaj bhi mere khayaalon mein kho jaoge,

hasraton ki viraasat ko tatol kar to dekho,

aaj bhi mera hi naam padhkar hairaan reh jaoge,

sapnon ke bikhre hue shishon ko jodkar to dekho,

aaj bhi meri parchaaiyon mein khud ko dhoondhte reh jaoge,

jazbaaton ki kashti mein baithkar to dekho,

aaj bhi mere ehsaas mein beh jaoge

khwaahishon ki udaan bhar kar to dekho,

aaj bhi mujhe apne kareeb hi paoge"

This is dedicated to a dear friend,who is finding it hard to survive,after an unfortunate break-up.

I have just tried voicing out her poignent sentiments.